Lucky Dog 1 translations 03 Bernardo Route 14

Part 1: Prison

Chapter 3

Guards Visit 4

This scene is NOT SAFE FOR WORK!!!



In place of a knock, Lloyd uses the back of his hand to bang the iron bars of the cell.

lloyd03 Lloyd: Hey there!  I have an hour of free time right now, so how about what we talked about last time?  Here’s good, right?

I peer at Lloyd’s face and fall into thought for a second.  To take or not take the conditions he’d laid out last time?

In other words, to fuck or not to fuck…  What to do?




gianprison05 Gian: …I’ll call the others here, so wait right here, then.  Just making sure, but you’ve already prepared yourself, right?
lloyd03 Lloyd: Of course.  My insides are slick and shiny.  Hurry up.  I’ll be waiting.

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When I bring Bernardo, Luchino, and Giulio over to my room, Lloyd was finishing binding his wrists to the bars with a rag.

gianprison06 Gian: The hell are you getting prepared for?  You’re sure riled up for this.
lloyd03 Lloyd: Why, of course!  …Hm?  Isn’t there one more?  What about the guy across from you?
gianprison18 Gian: I told him to head over, so he’ll be here soon.
lloyd03 Lloyd: Huh.  Waiting would be a waste of time, so shall we get started?
gianprison03 Gian: You just haven’t got the patience…

I tell Bernardo and the others to watch as I get down to business.

I make Lloyd stand up and pose with his hands on grabbing the bars and his ass stuck high in the air.  Without preamble, he drops his pants to his knees.

gianprison05 Gian: Man, you’re hopeless, damn perv.

Slap!  Slap!  I spank his bare buttocks.

lloyd03 Lloyd: Ah!  Aah!  That hurts…  Ah!

Even if I throw my whole body behind the smacks, Lloyd looks like he’s enjoying something about it.

gianprison06 Gian: You want more?  Have it!
lloyd03 Lloyd: Ah!  …I-I’m sorry…  More…!


Luchino: Hey, the hell is this?  What’re you guys starting?


‘I want you to help me make one of the guards our ally, so come to my room” … was what I’d said when I dragged them here, but I didn’t give them any details.

gianprison04 Gian: He said he wanted to roleplay getting gang raped by Mafia captains, so…

If I’d explained this off the bat, no normal person would ever come.


Bernardo: Oh jeez … and we’re being forced to participate?


gianprison04 Gian: Nope, you guys can just stay on the sidelines for now.  Just watch.  That’s fine, right, Lloyd?

I slap Lloyd’s ass some more as I shrug my shoulders at the others.

lloyd03 Lloyd: That’s … fine … so long as … they watch me get fucked…
gianprison02 Gian: Sorry, but that’s how it is.

Luchino nods with an exasperated expression.  Bernardo next to him leans up against the wall as he takes out a smoke.

gianprison05 Gian: Giulio?  How about you?


He’d been staying quiet, but when I ask him Giulio also nods.

Giulio: I understand.  You only … require me to watch, correct?


Now that I’ve gotten their OKs at least, I stop slapping Lloyd’s ass.

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Lloyd: Ah…  What’s … next…?

There’s a lilt to his voice.  He’s probably drunk off his sensations.  I can’t understand it, but there’s no question about his reaction, at least.

I lightly pat his red, swollen buttocks.  The skin’s unexpectedly smooth, but it’s gone hot from all the smacking.

Gian: You cleaned yourself, right?

Lloyd: Why don’t you check if I did a good job…?

‘And what am I gonna do if it’s not good?’ I wonder as I spread open his asshole with my hands.

I expose the dark-colored tightly contracted thing.  I quickly glance.  It’s not dirty.

Lloyd’s whole body’s shaking in anticipation.  He really is just as much a lech as rumors say…

I steel myself a bit before I place my finger up to the tightly shut opening into his flesh.  When I put power behind it and push inwards, it slides in surprisingly smoothly.


I didn’t expect for my finger to go in this far.  His hole’s washed completely clean, and he’s spread some kind of cream inside, too.

Lloyd: Ah … it’s going … in…!

Resign myself, I jam both my middle and index fingers in, all the way up to the base.  After checking the tight, soft flesh tract, I pull them out all at once.

Lloyd: Ah…  A-Again…

Gian: Hmph, you’re getting the real deal next.  I don’t even have to prepare you all too much to go in.  But, I don’t wanna go in bareback.   You prepare a pouch?


Lloyd: In my chest pocket…

I rifle through Lloyd’s chest pocket and pull out a package of rubber.

I turn back to the silent audience.  I feel kind of awkward.

Gian: Don’t stare at my ass too much.

I drop my pants and take out my own junk and, with some light strokes, bring it up standing.  I open the package and cover my dick with the rubber inside.


Lloyd: Ugh … ngh…  The front … too…

Gian: I’m not doing it for you.  Fist yourself.


Lloyd: I … I can’t…

Oh right, I’ve got him standing with his hands on the bars.  But, you’re the one who tied your wrists.

Gian: Hey, relax back here, nympho guard.  I’m gonna give you want you wanted.


Again, I open Lloyd’s buttocks wide.  I press up to the twitching hole and sheath myself in one thrust.


I feel the tight constrictions clenching through the rubber as it slips straight in deep.

Lloyd: Uwah!  Ah … something … big’s … inside…

Gian: Your ass really wants dicks, jeezus.  Look how easily I went inside you.

I give another slap to the ass holding me inside, making his insides squeeze.  The pleasure I feel is indescribable.

It’s then I hear the footsteps coming from down the hallway.


ivanprison03 Ivan: The fuck!?  Wh-What the hell’re you doing…?!

I meet Ivan’s eyes from across the bars.

Gian: …Hey.  We’re a bit busy at the moment, but, eh, come on in.  Line up by Bernardo and keep watching.

ivanprison03 Ivan: What?!  I came ‘cause you said you wanted something, but what the fuck’s…?!
bernprison02 Bernardo: Just come in already, Ivan.  Watching this is how we’re helping.
ivanprison03 Ivan: This ain’t a funny joke, Bernardo…
bernprison01 Bernardo: Just come over here.

Lloyd screws his face together painfully and turns back towards me as I’m distracted by Ivan.


Lloyd: D-Don’t look elsewhere…  Move…  Please…

The hole clenching again and again clouds my eyes for an instant.

Gian: Don’t squeeze so hard, jeez!  …Like this?  Ah, so you like being impaled…


Lloyd: Uwah!  There!  Everyone’s … watching me … getting violated…

Gian: Though really, this is completely consensual.

Lloyd: More…  More!  Fuck me more…!

Gian: Yeah, yeah.


At some point, the ruckus behind me’d quieted down.  I guess Ivan had no choice but to join in the audience with Bernardo’s admonishment.

‘It’s not like I’m doing this because I want to either,’ I whisper in my mind as I speed up my thrusts.


Gian: I’m … almost there…

Lloyd: …!  …Unh, aah, I’m … I’m cumming, too…!

My voice rises in pitch with Lloyd’s as the vice constricts.  By the time I notice the sweet feeling creeping up my spine, my whole body’s shaking … and I climax.

The tip of my straining penis intermittently splurts out jizz.  It’s a numbing kind of good.

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When my breaths slowly calm down, I realize Lloyd’s milk had flown through the bars and out into the hall.

lloyd03 Lloyd: Aah … that’s the good stuff…

I pull out from Lloyd while he’s completely intoxicated, and I start disposing of the rubber now that I’m done with it.

gianprison35b Gian: …Someone else want a turn?  It’s pretty tight.

I turn after I finish patting down my clothes.


Bernardo: I’ll pass.

At the same time, Giulio shakes his head, and Ivan looks like he’s about to barf with how red he is.


Luchino: You’ll fuck a man so long as it’s tight?  Don’t tell me you’re the one who played with pigs and chickens as a kid…


gianprison11 Gian: That’s an awful thing to say…

It’s then a set of sharp footsteps heralds another person’s appearance.

joshua04 Joshua: Just when I think I haven’t seen you for a while…  You!  There you go again!!
lloyd03 Lloyd: Hey, Joshua.  Need something…?
joshua04 Joshua: ‘Need something’?!  Get a grip already!  …Gian – and the rest of you as well!  Stop indulging in Lloyd’s whims!

Joshua flies in, forcibly drags Lloyd, who’s looking dead on his feet, and hauls him out.

Thank God for this opening.  I thought I had to keep on going.

Oh hey…  I’ve gotta check the important details.

I call after Lloyd who’s practically getting carried down the hallway.

gianprison31 Gian: Hey!  Lloyd!  We’re ‘friends’ now, right?

Lloyd looks back and beams.  I guess … I’ve won him over?


…It’s … stretching my limits a bit.  Rather, no way I’m gonna do it.  My face puckers in the moment I try to imagine it.

lloyd02 Lloyd: …That a no?
gianprison47 Gian: Yeah…
lloyd02 Lloyd: Guess I’ll hit up someone else.  And here I went and cleaned myself out, too.

Lloyd shrugs his shoulders and disappears down the hall.

Well, it’s not like I could’ve done anything about it.  Can’t do a thing if I can’t get myself up…

<< Back to Chapter 3 – Prisoners Visit 1

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39 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Britches
    Jun 16, 2013 @ 19:27:40




  2. Lavi
    Jun 17, 2013 @ 19:25:16

    god…. dang it Lloyd



  3. absenceoffaith
    Jun 18, 2013 @ 10:07:25

    Ah god XD. With everyone there watching… it’s super awkward and embarrassing to do. I loved how the other captains reacted though. That was amusing atleast XD.

    I just decided to go forth with the “don’t bang Loyd” decision… He doesn’t really help the escape in the future right? Or does he?

    In Ivan’s best route I couldn’t get the best ending because I didn’t bang the visitor the first time. So I had to go back and, bang that visitor and complete it again. Hopefully its not the same this time?



    • absenceoffaith
      Jun 18, 2013 @ 10:21:13

      n-nevermind *cough* I’ll be going with the bang option >.>….



      • terracannon876
        Jun 18, 2013 @ 10:35:34

        …Yeah. Sorry, I should make a note in both sections. The reason I put both choices up is because those choices never appear elsewhere, so for completion’s sake…

        To go forward for both Ivan and Bernardo, you need to choose the raunchier option. Sorry ^^;

        (If you have any doubt about what to do to move on in the game, please check out the walkthrough on the side bar!)

        Thank you for reading 🙂

        (btw, who is your avatar pic?)



  4. absenceoffaith
    Jun 18, 2013 @ 10:59:00

    Haha. I don’t mind the raunchiness (After doing the scene, I must say Loyd has quite the voice. Also it’s nice to see Gian top!). ;D I just saw the -10 luck and -15 omerta note thingy (I really like those by the way!) and ended up thinking that it would be better to do the non-raunchy choice because it was 10+ luck.

    You’re very good at telling us what we should and shouldn’t do though! This and the one time in Ivan’s route is the only times I ever chose the wrong one I think XP

    And the picture is Trafalgar Law from One Piece XD… *cough* I don’t know why I’m so embarrassed to tell you this… but yeah… :3



    • terracannon876
      Jun 18, 2013 @ 11:01:49


      Haha, I'm glad you noticed the notes o_o You're the only one who's ever mentioned it!! XD



      • absenceoffaith
        Jun 18, 2013 @ 11:20:41

        His hat went on holiday >.>…

        And dude I love those notes! You should see me in action when I play this. I hover over every button I come into contact with like I’m OCD because I really like seeing what the choices result in :P. The game is alot more detailed than I realized when I first started to play. So thank you for adding in those details. They’re very nice!



        • terracannon876
          Jun 18, 2013 @ 11:23:11

          Hm. If you see suspicious looking blanks, it’s probably because I put in semi-invisible text. These notes explain the event triggers. For example … I think there’s one before Giulio’s ending (when Gian wakes up; ie, when the best and bad ending are still the same), and one before both Ivan and Giulio’s second nsfw scenes.

          Have fun looking? 😉

          …Oh jeez, you must’ve had a hell of a lot of fun with the notes that come with the escape. Those notes are literally a paragraph long XD



    • terracannon876
      Jun 18, 2013 @ 11:06:12

      On that note, though, higher luck and omerta don’t lead to better endings. If I recall right for Ivan, he specifically needed low omerta.

      Low luck, though (especially in Bernardo’s and Luchino’s routes) lead to bad things happening XD



  5. RosetteH
    Jun 29, 2013 @ 20:49:46

    Um I think my game might be glitching, after they cum it redirects me back to the main menu…



  6. RosetteH
    Jun 29, 2013 @ 20:57:16

    Waah I don’t know what to do T^T Sound I restart and see if that fixes it?



    • terracannon876
      Jun 29, 2013 @ 20:58:31

      Try following the walkthrough on the side, too. Perhaps it was a choice thing…? If that doesn’t fix it, there’s also a patch on the tennenouji official site (I’m not sure what the patch actually DOES, but better that than nothing, right?)…?



  7. RosetteH
    Jun 29, 2013 @ 21:02:29

    Alright then, thank you vwv



  8. RosetteH
    Jun 30, 2013 @ 02:21:49

    I can’t find the patch OTL I’m so sorry for bothering you so much about this, the translator on my browser isn’t helping at all and everything on the site just looks like gibberish.



  9. RosetteH
    Jun 30, 2013 @ 15:47:46

    The patch worked. Thank you so so much ❤



  10. Lavi
    Aug 01, 2013 @ 21:13:28

    just question but is lloyed like rich or something cuse how has he not been fired yet?!?! it shows that almost everyone knows he sleep with prisoners so I’m just wondering



  11. Lavi
    Aug 01, 2013 @ 21:50:56

    oh ya it states that he escaped from that prison multiple times in the manga. and okay!



    • terracannon876
      Aug 01, 2013 @ 23:07:26

      Mmmm. Yeah, I remember that now. That was how he knew about the underground escape route. But he’s escaped from a lot more than just Madison 😉 He’s a jailbreak connoisseur XD



  12. Lavi
    Aug 02, 2013 @ 16:47:59

    XDD true true



  13. satelliteolove
    Sep 09, 2013 @ 14:50:28

    Man, when I got to this part…

    I don’t know if it’s just me, but this was the most awkward scene ever. I mean, power to Lloyd because it’s his kink, but there’s just something so hilariously unsexy about the supposed voyeurs just standing around all “er…we weren’t informed…but I guess we’ll just sort of stand here awkwardly.”

    I lol’d when Ivan ran in because his reaction pretty much would have been mine. Bernardo’s response was the kicker because it totally shows that they’re just putting up with it because they want to escape and figure Gian has a good reasons for nailing a guard with an unwitting audience.

    And I hope/assume it’s never mentioned again…



    • terracannon876
      Sep 09, 2013 @ 14:52:40



      I’m good. I’m breathing. I’m OK.

      No, it’s never mentioned again xD Not … past Part 1 🙂 Lloyd, though, keeps his weirdness forever and ever. No amount of time will ever erode that. (It might make it worse.)



      • satelliteolove
        Sep 09, 2013 @ 15:00:10

        Lol. That just makes it funnier. I can just imagine in 10 years, they’ll all be sitting around and someone will go “you remember that time Gian screwed that guard and we just had to stand there and watch?” and then everyone will avert their eyes except for Ivan who bleached his brain long ago and has since forgotten.

        Also, en flagrante, I can just imagine Bernardo and Luchino standing there and checking their watches, maybe going through a list of groceries they want to buy when they’re out of the joint, wondering whether they turned off the stove before they left the house…

        Giulio probably wouldn’t care in other circumstances, but it’s Gian, so who knows what he thought of it. And Ivan was just adorably outraged.

        Tears, they just won’t stop.



        • Lehst
          Oct 11, 2013 @ 18:39:33

          bahahaha! I love your take on the odd situation- I can totally see all the above happening XDD. Poor Ivan, he really may have erased his memory since he didn’t take too well to Bernardo and Gian’s “flirting” either.



  14. rin
    Dec 31, 2013 @ 20:18:09

    Um, is there any way to;fast forward through it and pretend it never happened? I hate voyeurism.



  15. Ageha
    Jan 08, 2014 @ 18:21:33

    [I realize Lloyd’s mlik had flown through the bars and out into the hall.]<– milk

    I skipped this part before, gosh, so embarrassing reading this now.



  16. notimportantprs
    Jan 22, 2014 @ 16:40:20

    Thank you for the translations! I just discovered this game and am in awe of all the time you’ve invested in translating it! Also, in awe of Gian as awesomest BL protagonist ever XD

    In the first line, it says “In place of a knock, uses the back of his hand to bang the iron bars of the cell.” I think you mean “In place of a knock, LLOYD uses the back of his hand to bang the iron bars of the cell.”



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