Lucky Dog 1 translations 10 Ivan route 01 best

Part 3: Daivan

Chapter 10 Best

Mounting Assault

…I dreamt that I was a kid again.

…I’d gotten into a fight with a dog.  The dog … he was a dog and all, but he still socked me one, and I punched the dog right back.


…And then I suddenly remember what happened last night with Ivan.  That’s when I woke up.

Gian: …Tsk…

…I feel downright awful.

I look over at the bed beside mine.  …Ivan’s snoozing away with his mouth wide open.  …The bastard, he’s sound asleep…

Gian: Whoo…

I get a faint whiff of sticky semen.  I took a shower and all yesterday, but … is it just me or do I still smell Ivan on me?

I skedaddle into the bathroom and turn the shower up to max, letting it rattle against the tub.  I step in and give myself a wash.

Gian: …Fuck, ow…!

The hot water stings where he’d attacked me last night.  I give myself a quick rinse…  …What kind of idiot am I…?  …I’m all hard again…

…It makes me a bit depressed.  I abuse the boner with a cold shower.  …It doesn’t back down an inch, though.

I wrap a towel around my soaked body and return to the room.  There…

Ivan: …Hey.

Ivan’s sitting up in the bed.  His eyes look at me … before he slides them straight over to the window.

Ivan: Shit, it’s already nine!  …Whenever I’m with you, I always oversleep.  It’s like you make my brain all dull or something.
Gian: Isn’t that how it always is?  More importantly, get yourself a shower.  You can’t go outside smelling like seme—

Just as I say this, I remember.  …Riiight, can’t leave right now.

Gian: …If someone sees you like that, they’ll have a good laugh.  Hurry and wash yourself up.
Ivan: Oh just shut up already…  What are you, my mother?
Gian: …Oh my, Ivan!  Just what were you doing in the living room?!  What are these shameless gravures lying around?!  Oh dear, don’t tell me you were masturbating here?!


Ivan: Shuddaaap!!  Throw yourself out the window and die, stupid!!

Waves of cigarette boxes and tissue boxes and discarded socks come flying my way.

…All the commotion doesn’t change our current situation or the flow of time…

We dig into the breakfast the janitor’d delivered us.

Ivan: But seriously … fuck!  Are we just gonna stay locked in here with nothing to do but eat?!  We’re no different from pigs then!
Gian: It’s better than being pig food if we screw up…

The phone rings again.  I stay hunched over in the sofa with my hands hiding my annoyed expression as Ivan doesn’t move a muscle…

Ivan: Shit!

Ivan picks up the phone from the table.  …It’s the same scene, the same actions, that’s been repeating tens of times this morning already…

Ivan: …I know!  …Yeah.  Yeah!  I told you, I can’t go out right now!  I’ll send some men over your way, so just hold on!

The steam that’s been boiling in his gut spouts from Ivan’s mouth before he hangs up.

The GD and other gangs’ve started attacking Ivan’s turf and rackets.  All the calls were to report this to him and to request for backup, but…

Ivan: …Shit!!  Nothing’s gonna get done if I don’t go!

Gian: You know you can’t leave right now.  …Is the city that bad off?

Ivan: The bastards’re pinpointing out my territory and rackets and attacking them…!  It’s really bad down by the station!

Gian: …Word somehow got to the GD that we can’t leave.  That’s why all the firepower’s focused on you.

Ivan: Fuck!  If I’d known this was gonna happen, I wouldn’t have become captain…!  Even being a pimp on the street’s better than this!

The phone rings again.  An irritated expression covers Ivan’s face and he glares at the phone…  Seeing those eyes and that expression, I pick up the receiver instead.

Gian: Hey there!  You’ve reached the Gymnasium for Problem Children.

Bernardo: And what a lovely bird’s nest it is, I’m sure.  …There’s something we need to talk about.  We’re heading your way right now.

A bit later…  The door opens without a knock and Bernardo, Luchino, and Giulio enter.

Ivan: Oh, what’s this?  All the captains are here!  Are we having a birthday party or something?

Ivan’s face twists, like he’d eaten something rotten…  Bernardo and the others say nothing as they sit down at the chairs by the messy-as-hell table.

Bernardo: You have a choice.  Bad news or worse news.  Which would you like first?
Gian: We’ll take the bad first.
Bernardo: I’m sure you’ve received several reports this morning, but … the GD have started invading our territory.  Fights have been breaking out everywhere.
Ivan: If that’s the case, what’re you guys doing hanging out here, hm?  Leaving everything to your men, are you?
Giulio: …The attacks are all focused around you, Ivan, and your business districts.  …You know what they are aiming for, correct?
Luchino: They want to drag you out into the open and finish you off there.  With you out of the way … the non-Italian CR:5 troops will be scattered without a leader.
Ivan: So you do know.
Bernardo: They could kill you, or they could convince you to join their side.  …Either way, it’d be advantageous for the GD.
Gian: Which makes that even more reason than before to keep us shut in here.
Bernardo: Unfortunately.  Now then … let’s continue on to the worst news.  The enemy has left behind one very troublesome chess piece.  It’s a knight that goes by the name of Honus.

At the name, Ivan’s expression flashes with bloodlust.

Bernardo: I’ve lost contact with the man in charge of outside relations at the GD … and his successor is Honus.
Bernardo: He’s now vehemently saying that from now on, the CR:5 negotiations are to be left to Ivan alone.  He won’t talk to anyone but him.
Ivan: Haaaah?!
Gian: No way…!  There’s no reason he’d do that other than making Ivan’s situation even worse!
Luchino: Of course, that’s also the only reason we can think of…   However, some of the directors are secretly taking this as evidence of his betrayal and are pushing for Ivan’s execution.

Ivan: …Hey, just get me outta here?  It’ll only take half a day to find those shitty grandpas and finish ’em all off.

Bernardo: Calm down.  I know how you feel.  However … it’s true that we can’t negotiate with the GD anymore.  Even so, we can’t let you out.
Luchino: There are quite a few moderates among the directors who want to avoid a conflict with the GD at all costs.  Whatever the case, it’s bad for us the Boss isn’t here.

Ivan: Fuck!!  And you’re saying I can’t fight back?!  Look at us, we’ve become quite some organization.  We’re just like everywhere else!

Luchino’s expression darkens … but it’s as Ivan says.

The problem’s not that the Boss isn’t here.  Right now, the CR:5, as an organization, holds the hot potato that goes by the name of ‘internal conflict.’

And the reason for that is … me and Ivan…?

…What to do about this, shit…

My mood’s plummeted, and Ivan’s a few seconds from exploding when Bernardo clasps his hands in front of his face and says,

Bernardo: Ivan, listen carefully.  We the Cosa Nostra are an Italian organization, but there are many made members like you who are not Italian.

Bernardo: To be honest, without you and your people, we can’t hold our own as an organization.  …And it’s also true that you haven’t received your due status or any worthwhile advantages in return…

Bernardo: This problem must be corrected in the future.  However, it will take time.  …So, please, could you bear with it for now?

Ivan: …’For the family,’ you mean?

Bernardo: Yes.  …It’s true that you’d climb higher if you took your non-Italian men with you and left for the GD…

At Bernardo’s words, I’m not the only one staring at Bernardo as Ivan also gapes with wide eyes.

Bernardo: Of course, we can’t forgive that.  But, even more importantly…  We don’t want you to leave.  We don’t want you to betray us.

…Bernardo puts the vague, dark feelings I’ve been feeling in my gut into words.

Luchino: Ever since we’d flown the coop together, we’re stuck with each other for life.  Well, we’ll just see this through together ‘til the end.

Luchino, that bastard, just tosses the words out all cool-like.  And then, Giulio looks my way and says…

Giulio: I do not have my own land or racket, so … I have always … relied on Ivan.

Ivan: Hmph … we really are stuck with each other.  Shit…!

Gian: Ivan, if you weren’t here, I…
Ivan: Wh-What?
Gian: There aren’t too many people out there stupider than me…  I’d lose one of the few people I could make fun of!

Ivan: Shut up!!  I-it’s not like you can go around calling others stupid!  We’ll see after I fuck you ‘til you’re squealing and bleeding all over again!!

Gian: Ah!  You … idiot…

…The fucking idiot … in front of everyone…!  My face skips the red phase and goes straight to white…  …The idiot in front of me finally realizes what he’s said, but it’s already too late.

Bernardo: …Again?

Luchino: …Ooh?

Giulio: …Bleeding…?


Ivan: G-Gaaaaaaah!!  Nothiiiiing!  I said nothing!  Nothing happened!!

…The idiot’s completely lost it.

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14 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. CHEN
    Nov 15, 2012 @ 16:53:14




    • terracannon876
      Nov 15, 2012 @ 16:56:03

      …This is strange. You’re the 3rd person to have reported this, and yet when I try it, I get it. I must be doing something different because I’m the one who wrote it, so I know what’s going on…

      Give me 1-2 weeks. I’ll write something up to address this. Thanks for reporting the trouble.

      Also, are you NOT doing the alternate Ivan scene? The one back in Part 1. Also, make sure to do Gian searching for the answer himself in the first choice in Part 3. Don’t ask Ivan.



      • CHEN
        Nov 17, 2012 @ 17:44:00

        ok, I don’t want to be annoying, but I’m confuse now.
        I assumed that the Not safe scene are not safe for the perfect end(best end). right?
        if I’m wrong, then I’ll just would like to know.



        • terracannon876
          Nov 17, 2012 @ 18:07:18

          Uhm, no.

          To get the good or best end, choose the “normal” or “best” routes from the translation site. The site you are commenting right now is from the ‘best’ route. You can tell by the “best” at the end.

          The Not Safe For Work scenes are, as they sound like, scenes you do NOT want to view on a computer at work. In other words, they are smut. Guy on guy. Sex. Etc.

          In my translation, when you come upon a choice, choose the choice that I did and you SHOULD go down the correct route. (Keep in mind that, like I said, I’ve been hearing problems. Tell me if the problem keeps happening.)



    • CHEN
      Nov 16, 2012 @ 06:00:20

      look. I saw theres a lot of not safe scenes with Ivan, and I tryd to figure out how to avoid them (frankly, I had no idea what to do)
      so in the end there something I am not figuring out what to try\do, and it’s kind of strage cause, scene after scene is exact as the guide leads except for the last final one. weird.
      I need to undestand what do I need to do when I am about to hit a NOT SAFE scene. (if that’s could be the problem…)
      btw, I think my friend send that to you too. we’re both trying to figure this.
      any help would be great.
      and thank you for replyng me so soon ^^



      • terracannon876
        Nov 16, 2012 @ 13:21:31

        Uhm, just to check this is what you’re saying…

        You want to avoid the NSFW scenes? If you tried to change the choices based off this, then that would be the reason why you didn’t get the final scene.

        But also, you must know that this IS a R-18 BL game. There will be scenes, some avoidable, some unavoidable. The reason any scenes are avoidable at all, in fact, is that you have to “earn” the ability to SEE them, not to give you the option to avoid them. As such, there is no real way to skip every NSFW scene unless you just hold down the Ctrl key and skip past the scene entirely on fast-forward.

        Anyways, I’ll try to figure out this thing with the Best Ending scene.



  2. CHEN
    Nov 16, 2012 @ 06:05:03

    and thank you for being attentive and helping ^^



  3. etyy
    Nov 16, 2012 @ 22:30:01

    I think in order to get Ivan’s best end, you have to ask for Ivan’s answer at the beginning of part 3. I tried it and I got Ivan’s best end. May I ask what walkthrough you used?



    • terracannon876
      Nov 16, 2012 @ 22:31:08

      The one from the Super Yura Pack. The walkthrough toes the “Normal / Best” ending line rather closely, so one choice could probably tip the scales.



      • etyy
        Nov 16, 2012 @ 22:45:40

        Hmmm if that is the case then I wonder what went wrong. I’ve look at other walkthroughs online and they said that you have to ask for Ivan’s answer in order to get the best end.



  4. DeAsia
    May 04, 2013 @ 16:50:56

    HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Stupis ivan, u let it slpi!



  5. Shirahane
    Nov 15, 2013 @ 12:38:53

    Gian’s voice when he was pretending to talk like a mom is so funny. I replay the scene for about ten times =))



  6. Lennie
    Sep 07, 2015 @ 16:07:55




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