Lucky Dog 1 translations 03 Ivan Route 01


Part 1: Prison

Chapter 3

Ivan Visit 1

Ivan: How are preparations going with the … you know what?

I think about commending him for not just shouting out “jailbreak,” but then decide against it because that’d take too much effort.

Gian: Yeah.  I’ll be keeping the plan details secret until right before, though.
Ivan: Whaat?  Oh, right…  Yeah, that way there’s less chance the whole thing’ll leak…
Gian: By the way, the info and tools I mentioned last time?  You got anything for me?

I ask him this casually.

Ivan: …Give me some more time.

…No surprises here.

Gian: Well then, I guess I’ll just have to get them somewhere else…

I purposely give a heavy sigh.  But before I finish speaking, Ivan’s in my face before I even know what’s going on.

     

I’m sent flying backwards by the impact.

Taking me by surprise, he shoves me down to the floor.

Gian: Shit that hurt…  The hell you think you’re doing, Ivan?

I glare up with a scowl.

Ivan: That’s Mr. Fiore to you.

…Wha?

Ivan: Mister Fiore.  Know your place.

He throws his weight into his upper body.  I can’t move an inch with him leaning over me.

Gian: You saying you stand above me?

Ivan: Looks like you’re too dim to get it just by watching how I act, so I’m gonna have to lay it out for you loud and clear.

Our gazes lock and sparks fly.

Don’t dogs do this sort of thing to mutts weaker than them?  Wasn’t it called “mounting” or something?

I remember hearing the whole thing’s absolutely necessary if more than two dogs are stuck in one place at the same time.  There’s complete chaos unless they set their pecking order down in stone first.  Whoo!  The doggies’ve got it tough in doggie world, too.

…Before he can pull out his ultimate weapon, the “code,” I give in first.

Gian: …Mr. Fiore.

Ivan: There, now you’ve got it.

Ivan runs his thumb across my cheek, as though complimenting me on a job well done.  Feels like he’s gonna poke my eye out, so I end up unconsciously squinting.

Then he says, like it’s the first time he’s noticed it…

Ivan: Man, you’ve got the kind of face a girl’d go all mushy over.  Pisses me off…

Ivan: Ooh, now I get it.  You used that pretty face of yours to get on the Boss’s and the gramps’ good sides, didn’t you?  Just like a girl.

Gian: Don’t you know a man’s jealousy is unsightly, Mr. Fiore?

Ivan: …Why you…!!

Sensing I’m going to get punched again, I tense up … but instead Ivan suddenly leans back and shoots a glance over his shoulder.

Gian: What’s wrong, Mr. Fiore?

Ivan practically scrambles off me.

I look around too as I pick myself off the floor.

Staring at us with his mouth gaping open is one of the guards.  …Ah, it’s Joshua.

Oh right.  I’d told the CR:5 associates to keep others away for a bit, but I guess actually stopping one of the guards would be a bit of a stretch.

Joshua: You guys…  Is this a fight?
Gian: Nonono, we’re not doing anything that bad!  Can’t you just let this slip?
Joshua: Of course I wouldn’t mind, but just lay off on the ruckus during my shift, all right?
Gian: Of course!  Count on me!  No problemo!

If we actually manage to pull off the jailbreak, though, I don’t think “ruckus” is going to cut it.

Joshua: You’re fellow Italians, so get along!  You shouldn’t be getting into pointless quarrels.

With those words, the guard disappears as he continues on down his route.

Thank god it was Joshua.  If we got thrown into isolation as a punishment, everything’d fly into the shithole.

Gian: Now then, what were we talking about again, Mr. Fiore?

Ivan: You can stop that now.

Ivan glares at me sulkily.

Gian: What is it you want me to stop, Mr. Fiore?

Ivan: That right there!  It just sounds like you’re taking me for a moron!  Go back to what you did before.

Gian: Roger that, Ivan.

     

Without another word, Ivan leaves me behind, moodily stepping out into the hall.

…Now then, who to talk to next?

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8 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Britches
    Jan 01, 2013 @ 18:57:21

    “I think about commending him for not just shouting out “jailbreak,” but then decide against it because that’d take too much effort.”

    You little shits are gonna be the death of me. I should handcuff you together and put you on a raft headed for a waterfall. That’d teach ya. … something.

    “Ivan: …Give me some more time.”

    Oh he’ll have HATED saying that. It almost hurts reading it.

    “Gian: Well then, I guess I’ll just have to get them somewhere else…”

    ….. I read “it”. “I have to get IT somewhere else” and my mind was in the gutter immediately. Good thing I got work tomorrow I’m seriously considering an intervention for myself.

    “But before I finish speaking, Ivan’s in my face before I even know what’s going on.”

    I love this scene. Lurve it. With my loins ah I mean a passion.

    “Ivan: That’s Mr. Fiore to you.
    …Wha?
    Ivan: Mister Fiore. Know your place.”

    Oh god bless him, he tries, how he tries /gigglesnorts

    “Our gazes lock and sparks fly.”

    ….you should honestly get that checked out by the ghostbusters or someone equally qualified.

    “Don’t dogs do this sort of thing to mutts weaker than them? Wasn’t it called “mounting” or something?”

    Now we’re getting somewhere. Someone fetch the popcorn. TERRA. POPCORN IN AISLE ONE. MAKE IT SNAPPY.

    “Ivan runs his thumb across my cheek, as though complimenting me on a job well done.”

    I loved this scene, especially the voice acting. I couldn’t really tell what Ivan was thinking, he didn’t really peg me as the kinda guy who’d do this, and it was awesome.

    “Ivan: Man, you’ve got the kind of face a girl’d go all mushy over. Pisses me off…
    Ivan: Ooh, now I get it. You used that pretty face of yours to get on the Boss’s and the gramps’ good sides, didn’t you? Just like a girl.
    Gian: Don’t you know a man’s jealousy is unsightly, Mr. Fiore?
    Ivan: …Why you…!!”

    And all I see is Homer Simpson choking the life out of his darling angel boy.❤
    These two are a comedy duo. Yes they are.

    “Ivan practically scrambles off me.”

    THE VASE WAS ALREADY BROKEN WHEN I GOT HOME MOMMY I SWEAR lordy he’s just precious (tho not as precious as terra. no one is.)

    “Ivan: You can stop that now.
    Ivan glares at me sulkily.”

    Good god I just wanna pinch his cheeks. … both sets, actually.

    “Ivan: That right there! It just sounds like you’re taking me for a moron!”

    /chokes on popcorn and dies

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  2. Silver Lou
    Jun 30, 2013 @ 16:22:15

    Heehee, I like so much this scene❤ I'm translating it right now ^^ Uh, can I ask if "No problemo" is an error? Is it a kind of slang…? (In the game, Gian says "Of course", right? xD)

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    • terracannon876
      Jun 30, 2013 @ 16:26:56

      … How to put this. It is slang? Kind of? It’s mostly just adding an “o” or “y” or “ie” at the end of words to make them cute or funky (cute, in this case).

      Thinking about it now, it’s also Spanish. Let’s count that a coincidence😄

      But yes, no problem => no problem doing it => of course I’ll do it. The reason I chose “No problemo” is because Gian says it in such a carefree way.

      Hope that answers your question.

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  3. S
    Sep 09, 2013 @ 23:21:59

    Gian says “Can’t you just let it slide” and Joshua says “Of course I wouldn’t” based on the context, shouldn’t it be ” Of course I will”?

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    • terracannon876
      Sep 11, 2013 @ 21:37:10

      The strangest mistakes are where my script doesn’t show the error but the site does… I wonder how it happens…

      The correction is “Of course I wouldn’t mind.” Thanks for catching.

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